Mid Summer Goddess

Savannah:
It is very good, the lighting and the style. the only true issue lies in perception and vantage point. some more depth practice and layout practice would do you some real good. otherwise, your colors, shadowing, and outline-less details are very strong. your water, glass, and sky distortion and details are very good, particularly. lastly, the only other thing i could think to add, is to be more careful with your light-shadowing; the umbrella is on the right, and your light source appears to be a good distance to the left; the ground shading for these angles is two far on the left side, even though you show Madara lit up.
over all its a good work, but the biggest issue is your perception and vantage distribution.